ShakespeareWallah

to me personally grammars don't mean a big thing...the plot does. and your one was really good.......though some of it didn't make sense to me....you mentioned the apartment complex as ...

No offense, but the most awesome thing in this story is not the plot but rather the way you say it... there might be a lot of grammatical mistakes but ...

Awesomely written........tells a lot of things in a few words

thanks for the review everyone.........

CHAPTER ONE Everyone hates those people who think they can still do things they dreamt of doing in their early years. I don’t, but everyone seems to hates me. Nobody ...

the idea of it is amazing....but as previously said it's a bit choppy in places....stop telling people whats happening and start showing them. that would do it.

I liked it a lot. this poem reminds us of what we all go through in life in a particular phase. i loved the way you made this poem rhyme. ...

Unlike others it Rhymes....and the meaning of the poem is really awesome..i liked it a lot

this is really good.

CHAPTER ONE There was a thought swarming around my mind. My imagination was paying off. The thought was perhaps giving me a weird feeling. It was somewhat disturbing, but still ...

hey.....first of all,the plot was really sweet. liked it.and the title of your story also fits well because I, at some parts of the story, did felt that it was ...

it really is amazing.

There are aliens. Sometimes called extra-terrestrials by nerd scientists. Okay, you might not believe me. My girl-friend didn’t believe me either, now she had fallen in love with the same ...

I liked it..

I liked the creepiness in it. it's good.