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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: You and Your Eyes

    hiya Carly, Thought the song was good, but my main criticism is that it does slip into cliche quite frequently. The repetition oy "you" i feel is quite unneccessary. However, ...

    Jul 18, 2009


hmm i think i just have to start typing and hopefully a poem will fall out of me
— spottedpebble