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  • Lyrics Re: You and Your Eyes

    hiya Carly, Thought the song was good, but my main criticism is that it does slip into cliche quite frequently. The repetition oy "you" i feel is quite unneccessary. However, ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: You and Your Eyes

    hiya Carly, Thought the song was good, but my main criticism is that it does slip into cliche quite frequently. The repetition oy "you" i feel is quite unneccessary. However, ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: Fear The Future

    "Fear the Future" INTRO: A sure, to me uncertain glow, We talk in whispers-they'll never know-this. CHORUS: I fear the future, fear the future, But I live for tomorrow, I ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: My Only Way To Love You

    Hiya. Oof i cant stand Taylor Swift haha!! I totally get what you are saying though. The thing is, i wrote this song AFTER id written a melody on the ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Luna 1

    Very very very powerful. Description was brilliant. I cant really add any more to the review than what the others have written-so i wont!!!!! Keep it up!!

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Lyrics Re: My Only Way To Love You

    ‘My Only Way To Love You’ Written by Danny Kielty Verse 1: Don’t you think its funny how, That up into the beams and boughs, A thought of you sits ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: And When They Get To Heaven: D-Day

    This is unfinished, but the concept all the same is all there. :D And When They Get To Heaven And when they get to heaven, To St Peter they will ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: The Fickle Finger of Fate

    Very good. I liked the variation of sentence length-which gave the mildly disturbing tone more power.

    Jul 18, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi!!!!!

    Hi, just thought id introduce myself to you all!!! (im Shaker-maker) Im hoping to learn alot from this site and hopefully give and receive some positive feedback for my own, ...

    Jul 18, 2009


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