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Re: You and Your Eyes
hiya Carly, Thought the song was good, but my main criticism is that it does slip into cliche quite frequently. The repetition oy "you" i feel is quite unneccessary. However, ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: You and Your Eyes
hiya Carly, Thought the song was good, but my main criticism is that it does slip into cliche quite frequently. The repetition oy "you" i feel is quite unneccessary. However, ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Fear The Future
"Fear the Future" INTRO: A sure, to me uncertain glow, We talk in whispers-they'll never know-this. CHORUS: I fear the future, fear the future, But I live for tomorrow, I ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: My Only Way To Love You
Hiya. Oof i cant stand Taylor Swift haha!! I totally get what you are saying though. The thing is, i wrote this song AFTER id written a melody on the ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Luna 1
Very very very powerful. Description was brilliant. I cant really add any more to the review than what the others have written-so i wont!!!!! Keep it up!!
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: My Only Way To Love You
‘My Only Way To Love You’ Written by Danny Kielty Verse 1: Don’t you think its funny how, That up into the beams and boughs, A thought of you sits ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: And When They Get To Heaven: D-Day
This is unfinished, but the concept all the same is all there. :D And When They Get To Heaven And when they get to heaven, To St Peter they will ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: The Fickle Finger of Fate
Very good. I liked the variation of sentence length-which gave the mildly disturbing tone more power.
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Hi!!!!!
Hi, just thought id introduce myself to you all!!! (im Shaker-maker) Im hoping to learn alot from this site and hopefully give and receive some positive feedback for my own, ...
Jul 18, 2009
