Shadowsun

... Wow... That is amazing! I got so caught up in it... It's written so proffessionally, it's fantastic!! I have to read more. Ali Kemal seems a bit disturbed, but ...

It's great, but the face is a bit stretched and the eyes are differant colours. Apart from that it's great! Keep on drawing. ~ Shadowsun :D

Granted! But your computer crashes just after you've finished writing it and you haven't saved it. I wish that my coursework is all finished

This is moving along nicely, but it still needs a bit more description. There are a couple of things wrong with it though. A yellow-skinned humanoid from the planet Ree, ...

Very Mercenary like :D. They're splitting up over money :D. I can see Brad doing something that messes everything up for he other two. Anyways. It's getting better and better, ...

Brute

Catapult

I can't really add anything that sokool hasn't mentioned. It's a good piece of writing but it lacks in information. Maybe it should start a bit before? Inform the reader ...

*grins* Photoshop rocks :D Nine looks the coolest.

Cool, there's Dragons now :D. I'm looking forward to finding out what the Tenjin is. ~ Shadowsun :D

I really like it. The wings just look so cool. ~ Shadowsun :D

I've read most of the Terry Pratchett books and have really enjoyed them. My favourites would be the ones with Sam Vimes in. He is my favourite character in the ...

Well, I like torturing my Elf character Roa, but... It needs to be done otherwise the story wont work. I get the feeling that he's beginning to really hate me ...

Wind

Sorry I haven't posted for I while, I've been busy with coursework and exams. ----- Sighard marched down the road with ten men from the bodyguard. Three ranks of three ...