Shadowstalker

Very nice, very very nice. I like it. Those that say too much detail? Pshaw, no matter. After all, some people like Lord of the Rings ....I think personally that ...

I ....like it. I think. I'm not entirely sure as it's...unique. I do like the wording, I can hear the water plop and ripple and all that, it's rather good. ...

Well....specific genre for stories? Not really. Mostly fantasy/medieval/science-fiction type things. But then I mix my storytelling skills with poetry and get a poetic story >_< Again, is all over the

Okay. It was....alright. Could be improved though. Spelling errors for one, and paragraphs are a good thing, trust me on this. ^_^ Oh, and double space your para's like I ...

Soo....uh, where do I put it then?

Ooooh boy. Where to start? Grammar is a -must- dear. It would help alot, otherwise readers just ....jerk from one line to the next, or each verse runs into the ...

Blending in almost perfectly with the trees, a rather odd occurance given that she's not hiding, Ayanah watches curiously. She stamps a hoof, yes, she's a centaur, a white one ...

A small child falls and Mother’s there, To tend a hurt knee with loving care. She’d dry the tears and hug them tight, Soon they’d forget their plight. A small ...

I'm Shadowstalker, a stalker of shadows be scared and hear me roar! *rawr* I be a random that likes to hunt shadows, I writes stuff, poetry and fiction and things, ...

“Yes my lord, it shall be done.” A youths voice echoed through the hall, disturbing the musky stillness. A sleepy girl wandered over to her fathers chair and sat on ...

Umm....You know, only one thing sort of majorly stood out for me. And that's how each new line started with a capital. Like, is sort of like you're writing a ...