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Re: I little snippet of my story
Hi Thanks for you review. I was just reading it again and realized I used Rain a few to many times thanks for pointing that out. as for plot, this ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: I little snippet of my story
This is just a snippet of a much larger project I am working on. I would like your input, I want to know what you liked and what you didn't. ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: The crow's call, Part one.
Wow.... I liked it! I agree with some of the posts that say there is a little to much description but thinking about it I don't think there is to ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Charlotte's Hymn part 1
Hey Winie603, Let me first day I liked it. it had a mystery to it that had me intrigued. I was a little confused on what time of day it ...
Apr 2, 2010
