Shadowlight

Thanks to everyone who reviewed my story! To clear something up, this is the beginning of a story. it isn't finished, or complete, just a wee little bit. and I ...

hello everyone! I had a bit of a authors crisis and have not written for over three months. this is the fist thing I have even attempted to write. it ...

Hello everyone! I am doing the 100 theme challenge and this is the first one I did #8 Innocence. please excuse the silliness and complete fluff if you don't like ...

Hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your story! Wow.......that about sums it up. this story was horrifying- But it a HOLY FREAKING COW THAT WAS SO ...

Hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your story! I thought it was a lovely story, I have always had a hard time with first person so ...

Hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your piece. On the whole I thought it was a wonderfully cool idea. I love looking as stories from a ...

Hi I'm Shadowlight, You really caught my attention right from the get go. I could almost see, smell, and feel all the things your character was. Awesome job!! the whole ...

this is a story I wrote for my mom for mothers day. I know I suck at grammar and punctuation, I just wrote it for fun. it is kind of ...

Alright this is a story I wrote for a friend of mine and I though I'd share it with all of you. tell me what you think. Fairytale No. One ...

This the beginning of my story for NANORIMO, which I never finished . I thought I post it and see what you all thought.I am looking for critiques on the ...

I loved the idea of this piece. the artist stuck inside his body,mind still sharp but unable to paint. some of your descriptions were confusing and I didn't know what ...

Wow.....Wow, Okay the first section of this I was thinking "huh?" but then I got into it and Wow. It was gripping to say the least. I wanted to know ...

Hi. I liked your story very much. It hooked me right away and I wanted to know what happened next but I have a few critiques. Through most of the ...

I like the idea of your story set after the battle it gave it an eerie undertone. I was very thrown by the last line though. "He lost to loose" ...

Alright this was written several weeks ago when I was in a stale season in my writing when I just needed to force myself to write something . I know ...