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Re: RP your character here!
Standing outside the cafe with her nose pressed against the window is a young woman, with that singular look of someone who's been thrown out of a moving car, then ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: I cut myself
Hi I'm shadow and I had the pleasure of reading your poem. I'm not really one for reviewing poetry. (I have dyslexia so I can literally NOT hear rhyme) But ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 6
Hi I'm Shadow and I had the pleasure of reading this snippet of your story! First of all I liked the sense of danger you gave your story, I could ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: VII--0.5
OH. MY. GOSH. Nuff said.
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Book Ideas
Alrighty! You have quite a list to write from! I have maybe 15-20ish stories floating around in my noggin myself but I never thought of just writing down a brief ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: The Cold Twilight
Hi SHadowlight here and I had the pleasure of reading your piece! Now I like the interchange between characters it seemed natural, and i really like two experienced soldiers compared ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Untitled as of now
I wasn't sure if I should put this in fantasy or historical... XD I have Dyslexia which makes spelling and punctuation nigh on impossible for me, I have tried my ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Untitled as of now
I have Dyslexia which makes spelling and punctuation nigh on impossible for me, I have tried my best. Please in your reviews don't critique spelling or punctuation errors, I am ...
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: The Lighthouse keepers children
I have Dyslexia so I know full well I am not good at spelling or punctuation so PLEASE do not point out those errors. I am looking for reviews on ...
May 16, 2011 -
Re: Skandar Keynes [pencil]
WOW Demeter......you amazing!!! It DOSE look like Skandar.....alot like him. I absolutely LOVE the eyes nose and moth, it almost looks like a photograph. I wish I could draw that ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Find Me
please note that I am a dyslexic. Do not could critique me on my punctuation, I know full well I am not good at it. Thank you. ~Shadow~ Find me. ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Find Me
Please note that I am a dyslexic, I ask that you do not critique me on my punctuation, I know full well I am not good at it. thanks, ~Shadow~ ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Story Snippet #2
Hi I'm Shadow, and I had the pleasure of reading your story. I liked how you dived right in to the action, not flopping around like a dead fish trying ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Dream
Hi I"m Shadowlight, and I had the pleasure of reading your poem. I don't usually review poetry but I love to read it. (I can't write it to save my ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Break
Hello I'm Shadow and I had the pleasure of reading your story! I'm not one for picking out grammar or spelling fluffs (I'm horrid at it) so I will just ...
Jan 6, 2011
