Shadowhunter14

Hahahaha!! Hilarious XD

Wow, excellent job! This poem was very poignant and I always think that the best poems are the ones that are inspired by real emotion (even though I hope you ...

Wow, that was great! Like Rob said, it invoked raw emotion and was great to read. The structure was quite good and I don't really have critcism for this poem ...

Hey! Great job! I really liked the idea of this poem and the execution was pretty clever. Your rythym was good but a little off sometimes, but it didn't really ...

Hey, I quite liked this. It did feel a little incomplete to me, a bit unfinished. I don't really mind the vagueness of it, although perhaps just a little more ...

I really liked a book called "Midnight Magic" By Avi; it's a bit of a fantasy set in Medieval Italy which i found interesting as most authors tend to write ...

Hmm. Personally, I was never a fan of Stephenie Meyer's writing. It was drowning in unnecessary description and after a while becomes, well, a bore. The Host just didn't suck ...

Well, I was pretty confused as to what this one was about - it seemed like a flurry of random thoughts that eventually kind of linked in with one another. ...

Wow, this was great! I loved the ideas you put into it, and I thought that it was just the right length; not too long or short. Maybe a little ...

Hey! Good job. loved the title, and the general idea of the poem. About your flow: It seemed very choppy, the way you structured it. It felt a bit more ...

Oh wow. This was a very emotional poem that was raw and honest, and i also hope it's not based on real life. Some of the phrases/verses were great, like ...

Hey! I agree with papernessa, this WAS a haiku (at least, how I always wrote one) and it actually made sense. It made the reader think a little and I ...

Hey! Just sort of repeating what everyone else said. This poem was filled with great imagery and I liked your repitition. The rythym might have been a little off but ...

Hey all! Hope you like this. I know it’s a little vague and quite brief without too much description, but that’s how I intended it to be. I’m not too ...

Hey, I really liked the overall concept of this poem. Masks are great to write poetry or stories about because there are so many different aspects of them to write ...