Shadowhunter14

Hey! There isn't really much for me to add as other members have already done some nitpicks (in other words, this will be a really short review). I really liked ...

Hey! I enjoyed this poem, particularly the title. It was a great thing to write about because most of us can relate to that kind of incredible hatred. One piece ...

I wrote this poem about 3 years ago. I thought it was awesome at the time; it even got published in my school's yearbook, but now I'm not such a ...

Hey, I actually really liked this! You said you suck at poetry but this poem is quite good in my opinion! The rhymes didn't sound forced, the idea was good ...

Hey! I thought that this was a good poem with some great imagery. A bright star shines above the trees, Above the reach of wind and breeze, I reached but ...

Wow, I thought that was great! The structure was a little strange, but that was okay.I can see that you had a lot of thoughts coming and just had to ...

Hey, I liked this poem! The overall mood you created was great and the language used was effective. I liked how the narrator's view shifted a bit, starting pessimistic and ...

Hello! I liked this poem. It was simple, but without using long, complicated sentences and flowery language it created a range of imagery well. Your short sentences really worked for ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading the second part of your story. At the moment I'm not entirely sure of how it links to the first part but I'm sure I'll fully ...

There's not really much I can crticize - it was a great poem with a wonderful theme and a great ending too. Great imagery you created here! but the ferocity ...

Hey! Good job! I've done a lot of poetry and stories for school assignments when you HAVE to use a certain idea or writing prompt. GRR. Don't you just hate ...

Hello! I thought that this was a really good poem. Some great metaphors and imagery. So well done. Some stanzas I particularly liked were I cannot see the sun, for ...

Hmm yeah I thought some of the myths were worng too, but I still liked the series. It was funny and an entertaining modern fantasy, and I also liked the ...

Hey! I quite liked this! Your description was good and I liked the way that you quickly set the scene before anything major happened. i like the names; they are ...

Wow, I thought that this was great!! Your vocabulary and the way that you wrote it in general was great, as were your ideas. As for criticism, hmm.... can't really ...