Shadowhunter14

Wow! This was wonderful! Really loved the topic, a great thing to write a poem about. The imagery was amazing, this stanza A movement shifts the darkness, The slender red ...

Hey! :) Apart from the grammar stuff I thought this was quite good! I really liked the idea and the first line was fantastic, really gripped me. I especially liked ...

Hey, I really liked this! I read it because the title sounded interesting. You hooked the reader right in at the start, so well done. Overall I really liked the ...

Hey, it's me :) So um, this was amazing as usual :D The assignment was a dot? And you produced this? I don't even know what I'd write 0_0 So ...

What I like about this piece is that with its length and content it totally had the potential to be a boring description of a random and unhelpfully-vague topic, but ...

Thanks Jimmy! :)

shadflowhunmteer143 Well, I tried :D

Haha thanks for all the nit-picks guys, glad you liked it :) P.S. I'm actually 14, Whisperer, I haven't the faintest idea why my profile says I'm 11. Ah well, ...

Hey all! This is a poem I wrote in a rush (so don't be too mean! :D) It was for Science - we're studying the human body. Sorry if any ...

Humor is great in a story in the right moments, yes. I agree with Amaryllis, don't add humor or saracasm in serious parts. It could sound like your characters aren't ...

Very true, Merlin..........and these tips were interesting but I must say I didn't entirely agree with all of them.

Great post! I totally agree, Mary Sues are frustrating. Especially Bella Swan. GRRRRRRR. You're right - If your character is flawless, thy're unrelatable. and the story loses all interesting parts ...

Adding depth to my characters, trying NOT to make them boring or stereotypical.

Let the Right One In is a good title i think :)

I usually like exotic or unusual names for my characters - I have an awesome Celtic Names Book which I refer to, otherwise baby names websites. Once I looked up ...