Shadowhunter14

Hey amygabb it's me again :) So this was a great idea to write a poem about. Insomnia sort of fascinates me, although it's pretty unpleasant to experience. Anyhow, it's ...

Hey! It's me Shadowhunter, and I don't usually review lyrics, but I thought I'd read this, and I'm glad I did! I know who FLorence Welch is even though the ...

Hey! You knew to YWS? Cool that you've posted something already :) First of all, wow. This was really good!!! I got gripped from the first line and you kept ...

I really liked this too :) A very hurried review, so not really any criticism - yeah, one of my favourite book serieses is inspired by Paradise Lost, and it ...

Hey! I thought that this poem was really very good! Good title and it had a great meaning behind it, as the other reviewers pointed out. I shall now attempt ...

Hey! First review, whoo! First of all, I really enjoyed this! Provided me with some really rich, great imagery. It sounds just like something I'd write! In my opinion this ...

Wow! Awesome poem! Very eerie, but very beautiful. Gripped me right from the start! Loved the title too, dark and enticing. Something evil in the corner, maybe omit this comma ...

Hi! It's Shadowhunter! You're new aren't you? Is this your first submission? First of all, I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed this poem. I felt that the ...

I've read 3 or 4! I liked them quite a lot! Very dark, interesting premise, overall very intriguing. Unique setting as well :D

Hey :) I'm a bit like you, a big fan of fantasy/supernatural fan :) I've read my fair share of Young Adult paranormal books too, although nowadays I feel as ...

Wow! That was quite dark! The reason that I clicked on this poem in the whole forum was because the subtitle was "this could be disturbing to some" (or whatever ...

Haha thanks thestorygirl :D

Hey, it's me again - I reviewed your other poem I do believe :) Nice piece! Short and sweet, but good description. I'm not sure whether the highwire symbolises something ...

Hi! So, I thought this was really good. To me it doesn't seem like a jumble; in fact it seems very well thought-out and put together. I like how you ...

Hey! I really like the ideas in this poem and the vocabulary you used, the only thing that majorly needs working on is the structure. As others have pointed out, ...