Shadowhunter14

Wow! Thanx for all of the replies guys! i feel very welcome now :) I really enjoyed reading everybody's comments, and thanks for giving me advice and info about this ...

I'd better do this before its TOO late..anyway Hi guys, Im a new 14 yr old writer. I found this site sorta on accident, i was googling "young writers" and ...

hi, im a new member too! I think the stories that u described sound awesome!

Nice! I liked the idea nd title of this poem. the only thing is "YOUR daring me to be the best" should be "YOU'RE daring me to be the best' ...

Awesome, loved it! very creative and interesting. i found myself conjuring up entertaining images of the characters actually rapping these! :P

LOL awesome!! its about time sum1 put down twilight!!!

Hey, i know you've gotten some crticism but overall i liked the topic and where you were going with this poem. well done :)

Awesome! cool poem, it kind of reminded me of a riddle, even though you knew what the answer was from the start. Cool topic too!

Hey, i quite liked this! The title interested me and i like how you structured the poem. My only advice is maybe not to use too much commas? there were ...

Hey, great prologue! well written with great description. i reckon u shud keep writing and make it a novel! :P

well i don't have any long-winded suggestions of advice, i just thought it was a cool poem :P

I agree with most of what CreativeFreak said, but overall i liked how u had such a sudden ending, it made me want to go back and read it all ...

Haha thanx people, well yes i do have quite a dark twisted mind so u can see where this is coming from........

Hey, great poem! I really liked your theme as I myself am a fan of Greek mythology and have always found that particular myth fascinating :)

Hi ZLYF, thanks for your advice, i shall take that into consideration :)