Shadowhunter14

Well I'm a fan of the Mortal Instruments series by Cassandra Clare and so are some of my friends...we sort of have a joke and we pretend we're shadowhunters (they're ...

Hey, I quite liked this! I think it was quite well structured adn I especially liked the very first line - it intrigued me and made me want to read ...

I thought that Inkheart was a really cool and original idea! I haven't read Inkdeath yet, but I'll get around to it I'm sure! Is it good? XD

Cool, thanks for the advice stelagineva XD

I like it! It was quite short but I thought it was clever, the way you depicted heartbreak. The only typo was "With a broken hear,", I think you meant ...

Nice! I love the Mortal Instruments myself and I think that you wrote your own plot and characters as well as Cassandra Clare! I also liked your dialogue and how ...

Hey, I agree with a few of the suggestions mentioned above but otherwise good job! I think the way that you wrote from Max's POV was good and reasonably faithful ...

Haha!!! Really funny! Write more! :P

Hey angelwings13, thanks for pointing those out - I'm usually a grammar fanatic so I'm surprised I didn't notice those! Anyway thanks a lot for your comment! :P

Hey, I think your writing is really good here! some great images being conjured up. Well done :P

This is my first story on YWS, so be nice :P Haha. I now realise that I probably should hsve put this in the Fantasy Novel section, but oh well....Here ...

Hey people, Yeah i know it's random and the "I" thing gets annoying after a while, but that's how the poem is meant to be structured, so.. Thanks for the ...

Hey - I think that this could have been a really good poem had you continued it - it was REALLY short. But your description was really good in my ...

This poem is called a collage poem, and that's because there's a particular structure to it (and yes, i know that it doesn't have much of a rythym to it.) ...

Hi Momo, welcome! I'm a bit of a new member myself! From what I've gathered, this site is really fun and friendly, so hope you have a good time! See ...