Shadowhunter14

Hi Dehidra! Cool name by the way. :P I love to write too! And so do most if not all of the writers on YWS. I hope you like the ...

Hey! I thought this was really good :) I liked some of the ryhming and reptition. The rythm was quite good too. it sounded really honest and genuine too, like ...

Hi! Nice to meet you. Um yeah, you've already gotten a lot of advice so...have fun on YWS! it's a great site :)

Awesome! I really like this. It was a feel-good story that deals with an issue that a lot of young people face today. Keep it up!! :P

I agree with tigersprite on the hip hop thing! Awesome! I always thought Tennessee must be pretty awesome :P

I know that most of us know of a good book that we raved about that was made into a movie that we hated, but what about books you liked ...

Hi! Well done! I really liked this. I think the overall idea was pretty good. There are a few nitpicks e.g. "...her dark green eyes starred" should be "stared" and ...

awesome! I loved the imagery you created adn the description. SOme of my favourite lines were....actually, I can't name them all. :P Loved it! Keep it up :P

I just have to use a pen or pencil....the thoughts flow better.

Well Im a fan of The Mortal Instruments series and my friends and I have this joke where we pretend we're shadowhunters, so yeah! :P

Hi! I quite liked this, but maybe you could make a few changes. Your writing style is pretty straightforward which is a good thing, but perhaps you could use more ...

I really liked the hunger games too! it had the right amount of romance and poltitcs, and I liked the world that Suzanne Collins created. She made it quite believeable. ...

Wow! I really enjoyed this! some of the lines didn't quite make sense and maybe it could've been structured a bit differently, but overall i liked the idea. The title ...

Hey! And yeah, i thought it was a bit too fast too - i wrote it for school and had a word limit, so maybe I can elaborate more on ...

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