Shadow_Thief13

Chapter 2 “Alvr why don’t tell us first?” “Alright, M’ Lord. So here’s what happened… Judging by the position of Nyx and Erebos, it was just after sunset. I was ...

So this is my first shot at poeetry in three years...I've been way to shy to post any. When he left me I nearly died Did he not realize What ...

Really good. But I would re-read it again to yourself. There were a few words in the wrong place...Might want to check over those. It made it a little confusing... ...

I totally agree with D7M. Definately a whole lot of meaning in that one sentence! I soooo look forward to reading more of your writings! ST

Lost and Discovered: Chapter 1 While the council among the kidnappers went on, Persephone was in such distress when she returned home to no daughter waiting for her and instead ...

I loved the beginning! I'm not the best critic but...You did have a few problems here and there, mostly misspelling, wording kind of stuff. I expect more from you! ST

UPDATED!!!!!! :D R&R please!

As much as I liked this it was to short. I prefer things long... *random comment* I have a big brother named Ethan... ST

I thought this pretty good, a little too short, and maybe a little cheesy. You should try adding more character description, I need a good image for this story. I ...

WAY TO SHORT! I must have more, this was so good! Although I did catch some grammar problems... Read it over again and read carefully so you can catch hopefully ...

Thanks It has been updated!:D

This was quite touching actually. Sad as well :cry: . All the corrections are above, so there's nothing for me to do here. You might want to read this over ...

So all corrections are above me and that means I don't have to correct anything YAY :!: Like the first person said, I'm confused about the time, as well as ...

Don't mind me...For corrections are above. This was great! I look forward to more :D . ST

Wowee! That's some good writing write there. I only caught one mistake though... She would rather the sound of her screams and the darkness than the silence. Shouldn't it be: ...