Shadow_Thief13

A/N: This is a work in progress for an English and a writing challenge entry. I know it needs work, but if I can get some helpful criticism that would ...

As a growing writer it’s still hard to pinpoint exactly what my strengths are. However, if I were to have any then I would have to say that I do ...

Hi Adna, Um... I didn't really find anything the others didn't, but I did enjoy reading this. Although I must comment on the fact that this was hard to follow ...

Hi, I'm ST! Here's the critique first: I found this quite interesting, and a new twist to the romance department that's for sure. You had a few mistakes, but this ...

Thanks for the review, DW (Arthur's lil sis, *laugh*)! I've always been bad at the punctuation, but grammar wise I'm not that bad. My english teacher and dad say the ...

Hi, first time at romance. Each student was given a picture and then had to write what inspired them from it. This was from English. Please R&R. One Touch. One ...

Hey there Newbie, call Thief or ST your evil (but friendly) neighbor. First off, you've got to admit, this was very short and I would like to add that I ...

Just a little something I typed up when I got bored during class at one point... One shot about the God of Death: Thanatos. R&R. Thanatos' Lament I was shrouded ...

Hey guys, ST here... I've been really busy with school and my computer has been having problems. I don't get many chances to use my home computer seeing my parents ...

The night was dark, darker than normal. A young girl in a dirty, worn out dress dragged her feet across the fields, heading towards the one place she had ever ...

Alvr is a fourteen year old boy with a life full of adventure and is the prince of the largest country in his world. But soon he meets a orphan ...

Once again I have updated, I hope you all like this rewrite better! ST

Skittles The paper is smooth and blank, whiter than a pearl. Staring at it quietly, I try to imagine what will come from my pencil, flourishing across the paper. First ...

A) You draw very well. B) ...Creepy, sort of. And C) I like it. It's always interesting what can happen to us whe were bored XD. ST

Thanks you two! I check reveiws pretty often so...I've taken your advice, and changed things here and there. Please R&R more! Thanks, ST :twisted: