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Re: Draco's first Murder!
I really liked this, it seemed like something that would happen and it seems like a good reason for why Draco couldn't kill Dumbledore 9 years later it's fitting and ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: the journal
One “Jaden” a voice called “Jaden Kaylana, where are you?” it was a man calling to me. I didn’t know where he was, or where I was for that matter. ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: There.
It was very discripted, but i didn't really understand what the poem was about. I'm probably just being stupid, but i just didn't understand. I don't want to sound rude ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: "I am a person too"
I might just be stupid, but i didn't really understand it. What was the poem about, where's the feeling the emotion?!?! i'm sorry but i did not like this poem. ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: bloody bride
wow! kind of weird, but in a good way. I was kind of bland, I still liked it though. The only thing i would say to work on, is add ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Exodus
dramatic! wonderful! i don't know what else to say! it's an awesome poem filled with emotion! Great job! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!!! Again awesome poem!
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Eat it up
fantastic! love the rhyming! Great job! can't wait for more!
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Safety from Myself
awesome! loved it! keep up the good work!!! Can't wait to read more!
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Karma
awesome! i loved it! keep up the good work!
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: <3love is love<3 [revised]
Love is Love Love is love no matter what people say You can be staight, bi, a lesbian, or gay All love is the same, whatever religion or race you ...
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: love is love
Love Love is love no matter what people say You can be staight, bi, a lesbian, or gay All love is the same, whatever religion or race you are Ignore ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Lost lovers(revised)
Thanks so much I never thought of doing that, thanks for the advice. ^-^
May 17, 2008 -
Re: The Billion Dollar Murder
This is one of my favorite stories that I've written so please be kind ^-^
May 10, 2008 -
Re: The Billion Dollar Murder
The Billion Dollar Murder I was drinking my morning vodka and orange juice. I used to drink coffee in the morning, but it didn’t seem to have the kick I ...
May 10, 2008 -
Re: Cliche
I love it! Full of emotion and kind of funny, I really liked the ending! ^-^
May 10, 2008
