ShadowPrincess16

The King's Death By: Colleen Tucker Surrounded by white walls you lay, rain pounds on the window, but I haven't left your side, I'll never leave your side, as long ...

I loved this! It was...can't think of the right word at the moment but it was really good. I couldn't find any flaws that were big enough to say anything ...

I've just gotta say that this is AMAZING! I loved how you could write about something without ever really outright saying the topic, and yet I still understood what you ...

This was amazing! It was very emotional, which is a good thing. I could actually feel your characters' emotions as I read. All in all, I loved reading this. -Shadow

Usually I don't review poems but after I read this one I found that I had to. This is a really good one. I could feel the emotions that you ...

Eternally Yours By: Colleen Tucker You went to my grave today and I listened to your every word. I listened as you poured your heart out to me as you ...

This is great! The only thing that I can find wrong with it is that you don't give your narrator a name. If you gave him a name, this story ...

First off, I really do think that you should post a part 2. It ended in a way that made me go, "aw man, what happens next?" And that is ...

I liked this one a lot. I think the only thing that bugged me was the fact that you misspelled despair. But, then again, I'm kinda OCD about spelling so ...

Wow. That is honestly all I can say right now. This was a really good poem. Actually, it sorta makes me want to write the poem that has been collecting ...

Wow. I liked this one a lot. I like how you wrote about something that I would honestly never write about. All in all, it was a fun read.

Thanks. I like putting myself in my characters shoes. It makes writing the piece really interesting. That's what I do with mostly all of my writing and it must work ...

Thanks. The "black roses" are actually just fake roses. I just liked the idea of them I'm in the process of rewriting it as we speak, actually. This is the ...

Thanks for reviewing. I'm thinking about rewriting this but I'm not sure if I should.

Forever Yours By: Colleen Tucker You went to my grave today and I listened to every word you said. You put black roses there for me, the same kind you ...