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Re: Their Love Will Live On
Their Love Will live on Rain drops glittered on the boy’s ivory-skinned face as he knelt in the middle of the forest. Tears flowed from his eyes without end and ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Pulling Me Under
Wow I just realized how truly long it has been since I have reviewed so I am going to give you the best one I have. First off I loved ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: Help?
This is going to sound like an extremely odd thing to ask for but it's something I have to ask. I kinda need help revising Book One of my new ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: The OCD author's pledge.
I should definitely stick to this. Unfortunately, I don't think that is at all possible. Oh well, I suppose I'll have to live with my supremely annoying Inner Editor. :)
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Should I continue on with this story?
I wrote the prologue to this new story called "The Dead Boys" and I'm wondering if it sounds good enough that I should continue on with it. It's about a ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Persecution.
Recently a friend and I told our parents (both sets are Christian) that we are Wiccan. The results weren't so great. My parents told me that, "Wicca is of the ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Girlfriends and boyfriends at the age of 10 - 15
I see this from both perspectives. On one hand there is definately an age that is too young for romantic relationships. But, on the other hand, I see that maturity ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Bullying
Yeah I've been bullied nearly all of my life. But it really doesn't bother me anymore because I have great friends, an even greater boyfriend, and people that love me ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Eternity
Eternity By: Colleen Tucker Do you remember how that summer ended? Do you remember our last kiss? I remember it all, From the first kiss to the last, from the ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: First Love
First Love By: Colleen Tucker You’ve never stopped loving me, in all the time we’ve been apart you still held onto your love for me, and I can honestly say ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Depression
Hey, Well, the first thing I have to say is that I really like this. You can tell that you put real effort into writing it. Being a survivor of ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Depression
Hey, Well, the first thing I have to say is that I really like this. You can tell that you put real effort into writing it. Being a survivor of ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: She Counts Her Last Blessings
The first and foremost thing I have got to say about this is that it was amazing. I really liked how you waited until the last line to say what ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: A Colt .45
Wow. This one was...amazing. It made me think of my best friend's suicide. You got the emotions down really good. I felt everything that you were trying to convey. All ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Broken
Broken By: Colleen Tucker Would you still want me if you knew who I really am? If you knew just how broken my heart is would you stick by me? ...
Mar 28, 2011
