ShadowPrincess16

I really liked this. While I was reading it I could actually feel the emotions that you were trying to portray. I enjoyed reading this.

My Last First Love By: Colleen Tucker As I'm writing this it's raining. have the window above my desk cracked open and the smell of the rain is coming in. ...

Wow this was really good. I could actually feel what the narrator of the poem was feeling and that's kinda hard to do with a poem as short as this. ...

Well, I can honestly say that this was really good. The only bad part was that when I read it it sounded kinda choppy. If you put it into stanzas ...

I can honestly say that I love this. This story was an utter masterpiece and I believe that you will someday (if you wish it) be one of the world's ...

I have a whole folder on my computer dedicated to names for characters, settings, basically all the stuff I need for my novels. It's really hard to pull things straight ...

I love this one! It was really creative. (Not to mention better than some I've written. )

Wow it's great to know that I'm not the only one that goes through this! Thanks!

This is very realistic. I usually don't go for realism, but I think you just changed my outlook on that particular subject. I loved how...well human it was. It made ...

WOW! This was amazing. Reading it almost made me cry, and I usually don't cry when reading something, so that's saying a lot. The voice of the narrator was really ...

I really liked this. It was...powerful to say the least. I felt everything your MC felt while I was reading it. The only thing that kinda distracted me was the ...

This was an amazing read for me. It was very emotional and well written. You do have some cliches in there, but they aren't too bad, so I won't list ...

WOW! I loved this. It was beautifully written and flowed gracefully. I'm a pretty good writer myself, and even I couldn't have written something as beautiful as this. Keep writing ...

Wow, just wow. I loved this. As I was reading it, I could feel the emotions surging through this poem. You are most definately a talented writer. There is no ...

I really liked this one. I've written several poems like this one, so I'm familiar with the style. The only thing I think needs work is basically the same as ...