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Re: Black Hearts Blue Tears
thx. i'm still writing the next chapter, but it's almost finished.
May 5, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
thx for reviewing. I dont really like this poem because it doesnt portray the emotion i was looking for.
May 4, 2009 -
Re: It's our love story
this was good but it was a little to short. You could have elaborated on his looks, his voice, or something else. Also, I didnt really get any emotion from ...
Apr 30, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts Blue Tears
Prologue His name echoes in the dark recesses of my mind. Clayton. Even now, the sound of his name can give light to a darkened day. It seems as though ...
Apr 15, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Fan Fiction
I liked it. When i read this, I could actually feel Bella's hurt and Edwards was an amzing read. From the opening line I was into it. You've written an ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: A Sad Poem.
I thought that this poem was beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. k
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts, Blue Bloods
thank both of you for reviewing. I think I might re-write this story from front to back because i realize some of my mistakes and I have some new ideas ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Choosing You
I loved your story. I especially liked how Jules and Sam interact with each other. I alos liked how Sam isn't too pushy about being in lovw with her. I ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- One
hey, I loved your story. It was great! i especially loved Sophia, she sounds really interesting. !Well, that's all I've got for now. bye. Shadow Princess
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts, Blue Bloods
Black Hearts, Blue Bloods Chapter 1: Now Tears fall, like rain, from my eyes. They are all standing around me once more. But he is not among them. Where is ...
Apr 1, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
thx 4 replying. I dont know how to rhyme, so none of my poems rhyme. lol
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
Staring into your eyes that day, I knew I'd lost you, and now you don't love me anymore, but i wish you did, I wish I could look into your ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: hey.
Hey peoples. wats up? me nuthin just sittin in school. (i have a free period first hour.) I love to write, to read, and to favroite thing to write is ...
Mar 9, 2009
