ShadowPrincess

I liked this one. The characters could have been a little more in depth, but other than that it was amazing. I could almost feel what your character was feeling ...

This was a really good idea. It was a good first chapter too. I definately liked your style. Not a lot if people think to write about Satan having a ...

I loved this poem, it was really good. I liked how you didn't have to repeat yourself to get your point across. This poem was amazing, and i think you ...

I loved this story! I can't wait until u get the 1st chapter up...I liked how you began the story. It was way better than anything i've ever began my ...

I liked this one. I mean it was a little confusing at first but I got into it anyways. I especially liked how you described what happened to the girls. ...

I loved your poem! It was the most amazing poem that i've read in a long time, It was vaguely depressing but i liked it all the same, Keep writing!

This was great. I could actually feel MC's (main character's) emotion as i was reading this. You've done an amazing job and i'm eager to read the secong chapter. I ...

In My Own Eyes By: Shadow Princess Mod: Name removed from post Prologue I was only thirteen years old when I was sent to live at Lyons School of Witchcraft ...

hi everybody! I'm just writing to tell you that i'm re-writing this story...again. I'm revising the Prologue and 1st chapter and i will post soon. thanks to all of my ...

lol. thx.

thx. I wrote this poem in ten minutes when i was practically ruunning out of my room, so it isnt that good. lol. but thx for reviewing and i will ...

thx to everyone who reviewed this chapter. I'm typing the first chapter on Microsoft word right now, and as soon as I'm done I will put it on here. the ...

i loved your poem. It was great. This happens to me a lot when I'm writing. I'll sit there for hours and not think of anything to say. It sucks. ...

I'm going to finish the second chapter and post it soon. I think u'll like the rest of it. But thanx 4 reviewing. I appreciate it.

The sister wasn't the murderer but you were close SuzieCake. She was the murdered. Clayton is Jessica's (the main character) boyfriend. U'll mmet him in the 1st chapter which is ...