ShadowKnight155

Wait, do it with a raster image editor or a vector editor? Although, I can import a SVG into PNG I guess, maybe I will submit. Tip: If you want ...

Personally, It was great, I don't know your other works as I haven't been here that long, (and Im too lazy to look them up right now,I am late and ...

Merry Christmass: 100. Have anyone bother to read this piece because it's so long and meaningless Yay, we can all be happy now! Lol My critique: You forgot your family ...

The ninja assassins! Its a coverup! Or, maybe I'm just justifying myself...

I don't quite understand the sharp(maybe a word like jagged would be better?) mountain peak and rolling hill part. That's about the only thing I can say, otherwise great poem. ...

To Dwell, To Live? I create, I destroy I aren't, I Dwell Frolicking, then Burning Incinerated by a Furnace from Hell Dancing on a cloud in Heaven Singing like I ...

I am a little confused, overall, interesting, but maybe be more imaginative. DONT USE VAMPIRES! Its a very cult thing. You hate them or you love them. Try to think ...

Great work, very nice. To me, the poem seems to be about how life is unpredictable, darkness around every corner, little light escaping from cloudy skies. Everything happens, seeming to ...

My interpretation: So, you are saying that science is lost of purpose and pointless? I am just as useless? I indeed over-think, and poetry is not my thing. This might ...

Yeah, it is an overused statement. Say something like: In modern society, Bullies can find more now than anything to bully someone over, whether it be Clothes, Brands(rephrase this part)of ...

I will probably post a draft(hopefully) by around the 17 of November. I am starting a draft now. My main inspiration right now is Rachel's Challenge. We had an unofficial ...

There might be more than four parts. If you are sensitive to death and light violence, don't read. There might be errors from copy/pasting(like asterisks(from page breaks) and no italics). ...

Interesting, the mood was perfect. I feel that the main character doesn't need development. If it is a dream world, she is everything. Enough said on that. The world should ...

After browsing this site, the thing that seems to be missing from peoples' reviews is mood. Its hard to create a good mood for a story like this. Also, the ...

I write a lot of Sci-Fi, and right now I have been planning a more abstract story. I also have plans for a story about a kid who tries to ...