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[Removed] Ive been tossing an idea around and this version was just a more violent take, if I decide to do this version, I will repost it here on a ...

Be aware of using the same word over and over again. I, ironically, use the word seldom often. In the Rangers Apprentice series(I read part of it not to long ...

I have to say it held me until the end. It almost seemed like to much information, but Lethero said it didn't have enough. You need to reposition the descriptions. ...

Best books ever(and when I read it, as well as description): Speak:Laurie Halse Anderson-This year-A girl in ninth grade, a little "sexual" if that bothers you; best book ever Eleanors ...

Do you know what sickens me? People who give up on reading great things like this, just because it is hard to understand or has big words. This was amazing, ...

So, burning someone's eyes out with a serif font with bad kerning on a website is actually better for you? Or at least makes your customers/ viewers remember your insignificant ...

[I plan on rewriting some of this, I do agree it is a bit forced :P] I sat here, looking upon the computer I Felt It The need to write, ...

Awesome, nothing like classic rhyming poetry. Nothing to say, it is somehow perfect, I thought it was impossible. I don't think you should capitalize all the lines. That is the ...

Well, I don't know if this thread would be considered "old" here, but I'll post anyway. Inspiration comes from everything and nothing. The best poetry comes from "nothing," a deep ...

We are both terrible at introductions then! And I'm even worse at greetings! This is a pretty nice community, I am sure you will like it, make sure you have ...

Well, after reading Kafkaescence's review, I have an ammendment to one of his points, or likely more to clarify what he said, we probably mean the same thing: It blends ...

Well, since I am still new, my reviews stink, or at least in terms of correcting grammar and spelling, or else your just that good. I might suggest not capitalizing ...

Great Imagery. A lot of times I have seen that said, but here, it was extraordinary. I read it, but I don't remember the words. I remember the "visions in ...

Hello, I'm dying for a review. But I won't be a begger. Please,please--there I go! Heres Le link: Long, so I will be patient. It is Sci-Fi, don't feel pressured ...

I didn't like it. Why? Because when I don't get something, I don't like it. A sad consequence of my terrible overly-analytical philosophies. Great Imagery, if I wasn't me, I ...