ShadowKnight155

Banned for having too many points.

I liked it, but I wish I didn't. The emotions you express are ones I resent, as the past is bleak, yet I clammer to it as they were happy ...

At a full sprint, arms shielding his face, Nathanial crashed through a pane of plate Glass block or like mini panes? glass window and into the embassy’s main lobby, much ...

I guess I'll go for some, I forgot about Review Sunday, actually...I got 17ish more hours I think! I'll get going! I did like 2. But, tonight I'm tired... Maybe ...

I'm terrible with this stuff, so I'm not going to say anything other than this: Stay strong, and we will all hope for the best. Remember, life keeps on, and ...

Well, I doubt I'll help as I'm 13, but learning seems to based on focus. Be interested in it, and want to learn it. Visualize in your head(regardless how arbitrary ...

The fifth stanza(although powerful) doesn't jive. It breaks it up, but be careful changing it, you could ruin the poem. It is a very powerful stanza. It could just be ...

Personally, I think it's perfect, if you re-wrote. Just kidding. You pulled off repetition rather well. The only thing that I really don't like is the "black instead of blue" ...

The title isn't really a "title", it's more meant to be fit into the poem. Please explain to me all your thoughts. Tell me whatever meanings or emotions you get ...

The right hand ring finger seems a little under-detailed. I love the shading around the knuckle of the middle finger. Great work, my brother loves drawing hands for some reason...

I liked the poem. I just can't relate because all of our teachers never send people out of the room(ISS/Detention, etc), they just yell at the class for 40 minutes... ...

Where do you write, when do you write, and what do you wear when you write? What stubborn little quirks do you have? I must know! I'm very interested in ...

When I finish or anticipate anything I get nostalgic and anxious. I then proceed to throw up or sit around groaning with a twisted stomach. The thought of something long ...

Well, I actually just made a list of my top *85* Favorite songs, but I'm not going to post it! Fave bands: 1. Motion City Soundtrack(Deep, Meaningful, yet upbeat(Singer has ...

Very nice, but I do have to say: I guess I'm lucky I've barely read any books with MCs like this! At my school we're forced to read so much, ...