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Re: Nature art!!
Very nice. But, the third one does have that bland art look you always see. The kind of thing rich people freak over even though it's quite amateurish, if you ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: A Long Poem for a Short Life
I stood alone in the corridor Surrounded by a deep abyss You climb from the lightless pit My soul a burning ember My skin is kerosene Your bones are frail ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Prologue 2
Yes...yes...very interesting! ;9 I will try to do a real review hear. First I'll start technical: (that's an easy one. not rich, not poor) "not rich. note poor" needs capitalization(like ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Ode To Zombies [contest entry]
Maybe(in the first stanza), "Although I wish..." instead of "I wish." The I wish just makes it seemed like your insulting zombies at first. Other than that, you made my ...
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Firefox 4 & IE 9
Yeah, it is a Google Chrome rip off. But, I do like the way Mozilla did it; a lot better than Google's interface on chrome. Chrome just seems too nude.
Mar 26, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things
"Pretty Girls Do Ugly Things" I second that. Just found out first hand, I guess... I disagree with Snoink, though. I can imagine some cute girl giggling and saying that ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: When I Should Be Paying Attention
Liked. I liked it, regardless if I can relate. I didn't see anything really wrong. I can't relate because...because...well, I'm a nerd. If I was in science class I'd be ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: Emo Poetry -- A Note from Death
Well, I'm not emo, but I have friends who are. I don't know if this is really the thoughts that an emo person would have, but I can't speak for ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: An Odyssey
This is an essay as much as it is a story. Depending on how you guys explain what you think I'm talking about(in your reviews), will depend on if I ...
Mar 18, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
Meh. Four was funny, most others were pretty blah, but I'm still in the perverted humor stage. :D No real review, sorry! -Skis
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: Aftereffects of Tsunami/Earthquake in Japan
Wow. It's sad seeing all the standing water in areas. It's like a nuclear bomb went off. And, let's all pray there isn't a complete meltdown. It'll be a long ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: You and Me
Your poem had great flow. It was great. I disagree with ehte92, the cruel and brutal do work. I think the repetition was done rather well. And I'm sure on ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: You Know You're a Nerd When...
You know your a nerd when you prefer to solve systems of equations algebraically rather than graphically! -2x+3=8 -3x+y=-5)-3 9x-3y=-15 7 x= -7 7 7 x=-1 -2x+3y=8 -2*-1+3y=8 2+3y=8 -2 ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Odd song lyrics
7.5/10 Not that weird, but an okay line. ---------------- There's a buzz, there's a buzz, there's a buzzing of bugs From flower beetles, yellow jackets, silverfishes to slugs It's always ...
Mar 6, 2011 -
Re: Long Lost Feeling
I stood in the doorway, my little feet below. The sun shone in on me. The warm rays felt different, than now. Back in the day, everything seemed so close ...
Mar 6, 2011
