ShadowKnight155

I don't normally do this kind of "Tips" thing. So, here's my tips and feedback I view as important(wow, that doesn't sound conceited!). Oh, and anyone who thinks they can ...

So, now you think I was joking? I rant on and on and on. For nothing? There's always a purpose, you act so vain! You are one sided, your bias ...

I agree with VEE. It shows that the speaker is vain and conceited. It's all looks. There's no personality. I personally didn't like it. But, yes, it was different than ...

Controversial? Possibly offensive, no language in it. Be aware when reading. Do speak if I should raise the rating. The only way anyone can understand this is if you read ...

You need a period at the end. "Hiding has hunks" should probably be "hiding as hunks" Overall, it was good as always. --Skis

Stanza 3 Stanza 5 Those stanza were choppy, but they did get the point across. Other than that, powerful story. It may be a tad overdone, but I guess this ...

Personally I like it. I understand the contradiction at the end. By human nature we're all so...naive, is it?... that we come to enjoy pain and problems. We still act ...

Eurostile and Verdana. I'm a fan of sans-serif. Easier to read. *Note on Eurostile: It came with my main computer, not my new one. If you look it up, now ...

Make it a song. Gets some horns and bass in there. I could dance to this if it was given a good tune! There's the best review I ever wrote! ...

Since this is the only way to keep all of my poems together(Besides my Portfolio)(For "The Outcast"), I'm going to use this. Ratings will vary greatly based on chapter. For ...

TOC: I love the sunshine warm rays clouded out then the extra warm ones seep through Trees dance with the leaves floating in the breeze la la la deedee doo ...

TOC: ---------------------------- I like the sunny days When the warm rays shine. The water of a hose and squirtguns. Mommy makes us drinks for me and my friend. Kelsey. We ...

I'm a little tired so I'll take the easy way out. QUOTES!!! Yay! Come and set me free. Learn to love forever. Let me come to you, And I will ...

ME!!! Oh, please, Great One! Please please please! I beg of you to help alleviate the drought of reviews! I worship your spamming and bumping of posts! Please please please! ...

Perhaps the unorganization that animekaratepup pointed out(which I for one didn't notice), could be symbolic of the nature of the subject? I like it. But, I'm still trying to figure ...