ShadowKnight155

Haha, I can't believe I forgot about gravity. :/ Well, it's actually not quite sci-fi, and the humans on the planet have no relation to us humans. Space travel isn't ...

Well. I'm confused. Good job. :p As on the grammar, spelling side, I didn't see anything. As I've seen you already had 2 likes...I wanted to give you some feedback ...

Hm. Well my review might be a spoiler if you're another reviewer, in the event I'm right about all this. Which isn't often. :p But, anyways. Onto my review. So ...

How would you achieve a 48 hour day? Or just ~48.*** hours. I'm writing a book that takes place on another planet. I've had trouble coming up with ways to ...

I was going to write a really thorough-good review, but I started it, it came out WAY too harsh for my liking, and it all really just boiled down to ...

Well, first off welcome to YWS and a great first poem. I'll probably sound really mean, but take it how you like. :) Overall I enjoyed the poem. It lacks ...

Well first off I love math and I'm a programmer so I may come off a little harsher than I like. :) Maybe I am offended. I don't know. :P ...

Hm... definitely I need to revise a couple things and sorry about the punctuation. That was a blind, sad mistake. :(

Some of us dream, of the Impossible. which I could not find. I don’t dream anymore. I don’t sleep. I lie awake beneath the midnight skies, for all hours really. ...

If there's electrical impulses, couldn't you possibly interact with your subconscious and alter behaviors like breathing and heart rate, etc, and thus also increase your electrical impulses into an ex

I'm quite disappointed, to be blunt. It has your name(style) written all over it, but it doesn't have your level of awesomeness. :( I'm just gonna quote cause it's easier, ...

Very nice. It had a deep, descriptive atmosphere. I can't really say a lot on it, though. It was short, but you can never really have a too short poem. ...

Are you saying that the pain has finally demoralized you and made you a walking corpse? As for the writing, it's a cliche, stereotypical topic. However, it's a situation too ...

I feel so bad for you. I could never imagine that happening to my dad. If I lost him in any way, it would be devastating. He's already had a ...

The periods would probably kill the flow. I advise against it. It was powerful as it is. I don't know if I completely understand it. I can relate to the ...