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Re: Chapter 2 (Part Two)
Sup Deathcurrent, I think that this part of chapter 2 is really good, but I can't find anything to change. The other reviews may say many things, but only some ...
Oct 28, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 2 (Part One)
Hello once again Deathcurrent, I saw the title of this chapter and thought, "Man is this going to be funny." But it was a lot more serious than the title ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 3 W is a Police Officer (Part One)
Hi Deathcurrent, I found the this part of the chapter funny and very foreshadowing. My favorite part of the chapter was the conversation with Sarah. A smile spread across Sarah’s ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Dagger of Truth (Prologue and Chapter 1 part one)
Hi Deathcurrent. I just wanted to point out this. I was getting madder by the minute Madder isn't a word, maybe you could try angrier. you and I may be ...
Sep 17, 2011