ShadowComet

Sup Deathcurrent, I think that this part of chapter 2 is really good, but I can't find anything to change. The other reviews may say many things, but only some ...

Hello once again Deathcurrent, I saw the title of this chapter and thought, "Man is this going to be funny." But it was a lot more serious than the title ...

As he said this I thought jeez, that went fast. “Whoops, false alarm. I had you there for a second there didn’t I?” he said with a smile on his ...

Hi Deathcurrent, I found the this part of the chapter funny and very foreshadowing. My favorite part of the chapter was the conversation with Sarah. A smile spread across Sarah’s ...

Hi Deathcurrent. I just wanted to point out this. I was getting madder by the minute Madder isn't a word, maybe you could try angrier. you and I may be ...

Prologue This cannot be happening. I can’t lose, especially to my own friend and family. I guess Walter is no longer my friend, considering my actions. Why did I do ...