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Re: The Time Rift
Thank you for the post, i realised by the time of this story, it's a bit hard to realise but the main character is actually supposed to be a human ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: The Time Rift
The Time Rift I was walking through the High Council, on my way to my office. When I was walking through my door I saw the queen. She was waiting ...
Oct 22, 2010 -
Re: Hope
Hello DannielleLovesong, I really liked your poem!! It was very heart filled and beautiful. I liked your emphasis on the darkness. I also liked how there is light and hope ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Your Soft Blue Eyes
hi Kingo, that peom was reallly good. i believe that if you say that to a girl thenn shea will go out with you. i said that because the words ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Feel.
brilliant, just brilliant! in this you explained the different ways to feel. for example you wrote red and on the next line it relates to burn or by putting something ...
Sep 14, 2010 -
Re: A Single Bullet
Kingo, great job on the poem. it was really deep and i enjoyed it. I thought you had a spelling mistake in this part "made me glade it went by ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Those I cannot Save
Bravo! (Clap, clap, clap.) Bravo!(Clap, clap, clap.) that was a good, and if I would, I'd rate it well, wouldn't that be swell. kingo, that is the first thing that ...
Aug 19, 2010
