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I really loved this, the violent dolphins were a little weird but I had to keep reading to see what happened next. I think you did a good job a ...

I love the idea here, I think is really good. A little confusing, I had to re-read a couple of parts and it's compacted but my only real corrections would ...

I love the piece my favorite part would have to be: Never a fairytale Just witches and nightmares about falling down a well. No dresses or ball gowns No faries ...