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Re: Seer Of Dreams - Chapter One
This is the first chapter of my Nano this year: Seer Of Dreams :D Tell me what you think. Chapter One - Reality “Consider yourself warned Ms. Phantoma. You only ...
Jan 11, 2012 -
Re: The Real World
Thanks for the reviews :)I have just put up the latest revision. I think I have all the grammatical errors down, and for it being mixed up, see what you ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: My Fantasy's
I really loved this, the violent dolphins were a little weird but I had to keep reading to see what happened next. I think you did a good job a ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: Silhouettes - Chapter 1
Thanks guys, for all the help on this. This chapter came from a dream I had, once I woke up it sounded like a good story so I typed it ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Seer Of Dreams - Chapter One
This is the first chapter of my Nano, I am slowly beginning the editing process... :D Enjoy Chapter One Reality “Consider yourself warned Ms. Phantoma. You only have four days ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: Silhouettes - Chapter 2
Chapter Two Men In Black At the crack of dawn all kinds of men showed up at our house, dressed in the same black uniform. Creepy looking but I'm grateful ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: Under the light of the Moon
I love the idea here, I think is really good. A little confusing, I had to re-read a couple of parts and it's compacted but my only real corrections would ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Silhouettes - Chapter 1
Chapter One - My Life's Goal I let a bloodcurdling scream escaped my paled lips as I saw what was in front of me. They were coming, all I can ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: The Real World
Okay, here's the latest revision of: :D :D The Real World I spread my wings, letting the cold wind whip against my face. Refreshing to say the least, souring over ...
Dec 29, 2011 -
Re: A Sad Story
I love the piece my favorite part would have to be: Never a fairytale Just witches and nightmares about falling down a well. No dresses or ball gowns No faries ...
Dec 29, 2011
