SerenityCross

Yeah my characters talk to me so much it's rather annoying. Oh, hang on a second... *Yelling in distance* Felicity! Don't burn my mum's flowers! Damon, Jason! Stop trying to ...

Hey-yo! My name is Felicity Weather-spoon and I am from the story Guardians by Serenity Cross. I am what is known in my home city of Aswalle as a Guardian. ...

A very well written poem. I am basically in the room with the poor king. Just one small bone to pick; The King seats I think that this should be ...

Hey, I agree with what the others said, this would be an fantastic novel. Just a few questions though... Why was Bloom's future sealed by a kiss? Why does she ...

Wow. I felt actually and truly scared after reading this. I was alone in my bedroom. Anyway, I could not find any mistakes at all, so very well done! I ...

I'm running low on new ideas so count me in! I would love a partner! :smt003

This is very good. I like fact that the killer is simply known as Tall Man. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Chapter Three: Alchemist Tricks Candise dragged Felicity’s corpse-like body over against the wall of the cave. She sat Felicity on a rock and leaned her head against the cool stone ...

I really enjoyed this chapter, it has the potential to be one of those stories that draws you in and draws you in until you get so caught up in ...

Wow that was very good. I'm not much of a help, but I thought is was good nonetheless. What is a 'nightling'? Just want to know. It was very good!!!! ...

I loved it from the first line. Sometimes the timing was a little off, and you udes a lot of complex words, but other than that, I loved it. :)

This is actually really good. I haven't got the Twilight princess but I;m familiar with the Legend of Aelda series. I think this poem is very well written. :)

Chapter Two: Spirit, Mind, Shadow and a lot of Water. Felicity, Cameron and Jason left the school and headed to the local take-out shop which was located on the bank ...

Um... this story is a little confusing. Why does Liv's name changed to Liz before the end?

That was a very good story. A little sad...but good none the less. I cloudn't find a single grammar error or anything. I loved it. :) :)