SerenityCross

Felicity: Hmm.. You can't spell? Natalia: Sasquash! SerenityCross: ... Felicity: I'm so smart! Natalia: Noooo, you're not! (Felicity and Natalia start fighting again, SerenityCross just shakes her hea

Felicity, Natalia and Cameron walked through the door of the cafe and glance around for a table. Felicity flicks her blonde hair over her shoulder, leant against the door frame, ...

Felicity: Well, I probably would take my sword and Crimson, my phoenix partner. We would be ready for any fight! ( Natalia walks in, sits on top of Felicity ) ...

... (Bawls like a two year old) You made me so sad!!!!

I walked into the bar and looked around. Apart from one person having some sort of alchaholic drink, and an elf with partially burned clothes asleep on the counter, the ...

Hi. I am in need for someone to re review my novel, because I have edited it and added the next chapter. Both constructive and negative critisism is welcome and ...

*Shudders* Oh, God WHY DID YOU STOP!!!! This is so scary and You have a way of writing which makes me want to keep reading. Now, you've forced me to ...

*Shudders* God, way to get my mind into creepy mode! *Shudders again* Thanks for that. Apart from the...*Shudders yet again* It is very well written. You should write horror books. ...

Well done!! I can totally believe that you are one with the ocean. I could not find any mistakes, so I assume that means that there are none! You should ...

Chapter Four: How they got their Powers “I guess my hate of water started when I first got my powers, when I was about six,” Felicity began, “I was at ...

Hi!! Oh god I cried when I read this, and I havent cried since I broke my arm in Kindy!!!! I applaude no,no I WORSHIP you for making me cry. ...

This is very well written. Like others have said, a bit graphic, but don't let that stop you. I LOVE dragons, and if you dont see the story as a ...

Hey. I have been writing this novel for a while and I've just edited all the chapters I have posted and I will add a couple of new chapters and ...

Hey. This is a very good story. I like the fact that it's told from a girl's perspective. You don't really see girls fighting hand-to-hand... Anyway, this is a really ...

Interesting and very clever. Ha ha SUCK IT MOON!!!