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Sorry Sylverdawn, I completely missed this. :smt012 Rath climbed the stairs of the tower spiraling upward, at last he was able to reach the top of the tower. He staggered ...

Who is who...? I agree with Azila. You both are cute. :D Which of you is the darker one? You look kind of like me... :smt105

You need to draw this out more. Why do these girls so willingly accept his proposal? How is this a contests? You need to give us more details. I mean, ...

You need to space between paragraphs... including dialogue :)+:)=:D When you do that, I will be more than happy to review. :smt035

Good to know. :) Thanks for telling us. :D:D:D

This piece is really good. The only thing is that towards the end, it's confusing about who is doing what. Just a little clarification is needed there. :D

I will crit thise later. Unfortunately, I have some business to attend to :)+:)=:D

Oh, for a title I suggest you use another word meaning 'silent,' or use and antonym, like 'Muse' or something... :D:D:D:D

Thanks for your advice, and welcome!!! :smt040

You need to space between paragraphs. :) As soon as you do that, I'd be more than happy to crit this piece :D:D:D:D:D :smt035

You need to put a space between your paragraphs :)+:)=:D

WHOA!!!! You really need to break this into smaller paragraphs. At the moment it looks very HUGE. :D

Speech is important for ruling a kingdom and without it you could be easily over thrown ... or considered a demon or witch ;) Soldiers came knocking on doors, looking ...

Yes, please POST!!!!! I want to know what happens.... The thrill, the excitement, it's just one post away.... :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D If there is anything I have said to offend you, please ...

:smt045 I don't know how to invite though. I think you go to the profile or something :smt017 Anyway, YES I will be your friend!! :D:D:D:D:D:D :smt035