SeraphTree

Raven- How are you? It’s been a while since I’ve seen you. Me, well… you don’t want to know. Sorry, not in a very good mood. I’d rather not go ...

I will crit this later. Currently I am entirely too angry. [Not at you :)]

Sorry, forgot where this was. *face hand* This dawn was scarcely different, and yet this dawn clawed at Valoc's mind, the very sight of this dawn raped his soul like ...

Love the last line.:D You say to me that life is a breeze, but mine has turned to a storm. You say for me to take a break, but this ...

Oops! Sorry that last analogy was backwards -.-* You get the idea though :D

You felt this? Hm. The 'poor me' writing does your feelings no justice. Think about what you really feel. Do you feel alone? Do you feel misunderstood? Do you just ...

I can tell that you were very emotional during this. Your detachment as you remember is real. I can tell because I've felt similar. :) My suggestion is that you ...

This should probably be in poetry ;)

No problem. Always glad to help :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Well, I haven't done any critting on it because it looks so... :smt119 huge. There's an edit/modify button in the right hand corner of your screen.

This is very interesting, albiet a little short. :( The Man stomping carelessly, feeling no passion, looking harsh. Thinking, in his deepest mind, about the pain of his words cutting ...

Author13... I'm sorry, but I do not like this piece. I'll tell you why. “Dad,” Eve said calmly, “if he goes, I go, and you will never see me again.” ...

put a space between paragraphs. :D:D:D:D:D It looks huge at the moment :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

I will crit this tomorrow. It''s too late at the moment. :( What I've read sounds very interesting though :D:D:D:D

MONKI!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Okee dokee then... And you're supposed to be... No, no! Wait! Let me guess! My genie? My fairy godmother?!" I sarcastically ask. I close my eyes tr