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"Excuse me!" said a voice coming down from below. Aeo looked down and saw a young man by his side. "Battles haven't started yet. After this first fight, you may ...

"Whenever you are ready dear child. You may make the frist strike." Aeo said, his voice effortlessly thundering around the room. Aeo then started to absorb the energy from the ...

Aeo decided that he would also take part in these duels that have been happening. He brought up his right hand and created around himself a pillar of light. Beckoning ...

"It seems so many of these activities are without true meaning to this event," muttered Aeo. "That is why I must show them the true extravagance of this event!" He ...

"If I may, your honor," replied Aeo. He then stepped up and announced The Festival's story for all to hear. "The Festival is an extraordinary event that only happens once ...

Just as he was about to greet the small dragon, Aeo overheard a small girl. She had pink hair and looked so innocent. Accustomed to answering prayers, Aeo could not ...

Aeo carefully observed every detail of the event. He noticed a few new faces. Amongst those was a girl with violet eyes that strangely resembled his own... Another kid, the ...

Eyes tempting, Reality melting, I saw the man in the dark cloak. His hair, a dark and devilish plumage, swayed like a smoky serpent. His eyes, flashing a blood-red luminescence ...

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In the concealment of the trees, Aeophrenilous Nicolai Carpathia Stradivabach, or Aeo for short, studied the actions of his human companions through the glass that they were seperated by. They ...