SeleneForeverDream

That was exceptional and very universal. What I really like about it is that it makes you think. This seems like something that you took a long time on or ...

This is her first diary entry and I wrote this a few years ago. Truthfully, I don't want to continue it because I really don't like it, but I just ...

Okay, well there were many mistakes in one (rather large) paragraph, but instead of critiquing every word, I am going to give you some advice. When you write you need ...

Actually, looking at this now I think it should have been placed in Other... Hmmm. Well, please review without pointing that out to me because I already know.

There were actually very few mistakes. Also, the flow was really nice, though occasionally interrupted, I felt like when I was reading the excerpt of Midnight Sun and I was ...

Journal of Mary May Moonlight shining on my pillow As I lay asleep Is your skin, new fallen snow It rests upon my cheek The shooting stars that are your ...

I hate suicides. Oh, and why would you come back to gym? That would be the one thing I would skip. :)

There are a lot of mistakes, but other than that the story itself is very interesting. Also, have you ever read the Sword of Truth series? Richard is the Seeker ...