SeleneForeverDream

Have you ever seen real suffering in one’s eye? Or heard it clear in their cry? Have you ever felt helpless in such a place? Or just did you just ...

Jasper: I felt all the emotions swirl around me, especially emanating from Alice. I grimaced as I felt her worry and fear for Edward, because I felt it just as ...

Welcome to the YWS! Well, I agree with Maki-Chan that you should really post one chapter at a time, but I will still happily read this! Just remember next time! ...

Okay, sorry about my last post. I think you really should change the title, because people view your work based on how interesting your title and description is. I understand ...

*OKay, Kairi and Edward just went and got some coffee. Now they are strolling through the park and Edward is walking her back to her apartment.* "Thanks for the coffee. ...

Name: Sepia Damien Age: 25 Race: Djinn Location: Volca Apperance: (normal form) History: She is queen to King Liamades. They fell in love while battling side by side. Other: Kills ...

Aw, this was an adorable prologue! This was a wonderful start to your story and I'll be looking forward to your next chapter! Whenever someone annoys me, a simple “go ...

Okay, so I have just read your first chapter of your other story and I have to say... I like the other one just a tad more than I like ...

Name: Kate Mally Age: 19 Gender: Female Good or bad: Can be either one, depending on her mood. So she's neutral most of the time. Personality: Is very out-going and ...

*My perfect place to come in! :)* Nick "Oh, it was my fault.", I said as I helped Rebecca up from the floor. "Thanks", she said as she popped up ...

*Is it possible I could have another queen, because I really want another character?*

Abe Lincoln was my favorite president, but that might be because I've read so many books about him, all of which were very supportive of him. I don't like him ...

Name: Kate Laney Appearance: History: She has always been slightly suspicious of how her parents act around her with certain subjects, but she has never once thought of time travel. ...

I'm not big on those How to books, but if your writing fantasy I have a regular book that's one of my favorites and helps me write. The Sword of ...

*Oops, sorry I never read your post.*