SeleneForeverDream

Thanks for the review. I'm a grammar freak too, but I guess we still make mistakes. :)

*This chapter is really just to show everyday emotions the main character has. The story's plot will really pick up in the next chapter.* Break my Heart and Hope to ...

Oh, I should have reviewed this a while ago.. well, better late than never. Length - I loved. I would have preferred more, but considering the circumstances I think it ...

I am from America! TPBM is in their pajamas, cuz I know I am!

8/10 Interesting, if not a bit eccentric. ;)

OMG KailaMaie, we have the same exact fears! I'm not too fond of heights... at all... and I had terrible nightmares about falling down escalators when I was little. The ...

*I don't know any French... I'm taking Spanish, but figured the language just seemed to fit.* Timmy Ciummo I looked over from my seat and smiled at her as she ...

Well done on this chapter, I loved it! It's another excellent chapter for an excellent story. I think most of the error were found by your other replies, so no ...

*Lol, I have a friend named Tommy. I just think Timmy's a cute name. :)* "Are you alright?" I asked, concerned. That must be one rough first day. "I'm fine." ...

*I think the Heroes should start grouping together, because the Villains are teaming up.* Tara I was going over to the hospital to begin the night shift as an intern. ...

There was a rustle coming from the bush and everyone changed from their happiness about the raft to immediately wary. Everyone edged over towards the river, not wanting to get ...

I have a lot of mixed emotions about this chapter. Firstly, I thought it was very funny. Quite an amusing chapter, so congrats. Second, I thought it was just a ...

I think it's because I just love seeing books that are mine, not anyone elses, that I can read whenever I want and however many times I want. That's why ...

I thought about the girl in the front of the class and watched her curiously, sure she did some strange things, but she caught my interest immediately. The teacher had ...

Banned for having bad grammar!