SeleneForeverDream

Hey there, Aspiring! :D I'm here to get reviewin'! Nit-Picks: He peeled his eyes away from her face and studied the old worn bookmark on the girls pant leg. Apostrophe ...

Okay, it seems everyone has given his/her opinion on the matter, and don't get me wrong it's very intriguing. Let's just go through mechanics first, though. ;) Then on to ...

Hiya CoF! :D Let's see what you have here. Nit-Picks: Standing there, with your innocent stare. Even though this comma goes well with the rest of your stanza, it's unnecessary. ...

Hiya SporkPunk (cool name, by the way)! Welcome to Young Writers Society! You like Placebo? :D I was just listening to "Running Up That Hill". I love the hopeful sadness ...

Heya, f1shes! Welcome, welcome, welcome to the wonderfully wacky world of YWS! So from what I've gathered you like photography? We have a wonderful Art & Photography forum here on ...

Hello there, Masquerade! Welcome to YWS! I'm Selene, and it's so nice to meet you. ^_^ I love your avatar! It reminds me of the Dust Man or whatever his ...

Hey there, Ducky! I'm Selene, and it's lovely to meet you. ^_^ This was such a cute little story! I liked that this had a beginning, middle, and end to ...

This feels like lyric poetry to me... I'll review it when your piece is moved to the Poetry section. No biggy. ^_^ Until then, welcome, welcome, welcome to the wonderful ...

*Someone is going to want to put me in an asylum after this... Just so you know I love cats. They're my favorite animals. Also, I wrote this because I ...

My friend just cracked his ribs and he didn't spend anytime in the ER. He just got a nice pat on the back and the doctor said he hoped he ...

I liked this poem from the first two lines. Your ties between a personal self, or a human who feels emotion, and the scarecrow was very well done. I read ...

Hey there, Hugs! *hugs* Welcome to YWS! :D I'm Selene, and it's lovely to meet you. ^_^ Have you checked out this huge site yet? YWS may seem intimidating at ...

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Hey there, Greyson! Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! I'm Selene *shakes hand* and it's nice to meet you. ^_^ So what are your hobbies besides writing? Do you ...

Wow, that was truly touching. First off, I'm sorry about your mom. It's tough living with an alcoholic in the house because they become consumed by drinking. It's a horrible ...