SeleneForeverDream

Okay, so I'm just going to say first off that I read this poem when you first posted it. I hadn't had time to review it but I thought about ...

Hey, Styley, and welcome to Young Writer's Society! :D First off, I must say I enjoyed this poem. I liked how you alluded to the death of the speaker in ...

Stolen Lips pressed to bare skin, it melts at a small, daring touch, because from that heat it must want too much. Haze in eyes and mist from mouth captured ...

Name (First/Last, or First/Middle/Last—nicknames allowed in quotes): Kaley "Kale" Shalles Age (14-18 yrs. [unless he/she is brilliant or dense]): 15 Gender: Female Hair Color, Style, and Length: Lon

Ooo, this is interesting! Your point of view is very interesting and your story here was enough to keep me reading. Here are just a few nit-picks- The whole ordeal ...

Hey there, grigoris! :D Welcome to Young Writers Society! Have you been to the Welcome Mat yet? It's in Community forums. If you go a bunch of friendly people will ...

Hiya, dege! Welcome to Young Writers Society! *shakes hand* I'm Selene, and if you need anything feel free to ask. So have you taken a look around YWS? Since you're ...

Hey there, Hobbit! This looks pretty interesting, so let's see what we've got. The only thing that really stood out to me was the jumping of ideas between your first ...

Boxed Loving trust, we all must- Jumble, mumble spurs of wonder turn into a childlike hunger Hollow sounds resound around a tiny hole beneath the ground Bubbles pop rainbow clouds, ...

Aw, thanks peanut! :D

Thanks for the replies, guys! These are all really good ideas. I think the easiest might be to just tell my teacher about it and get the okay or PM ...

Hey there, photo! I love the idea you had behind this poem. Your first stanza is very eye-catching in the sense that it's distinctive from other poems. It had an ...

Okay, so I may just be silly, but I've always been a bit hesitant about posting an essay online because schools I have attended have a zero plagiarism rule. They ...

Hiya KitRose! I'm Selene, and I shall be your reviewer for today. ^_^ So you really didn't give me much to work with here. :/ Well, I'll give it a ...

Hey, Starmaker! :D Welcome, welcome, welcome to Young Writers Society! Have you read the Host by Stephanie Meyer? Her other books, the Twilight series, were okay in my opinion, but ...