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Re: Words Cut Thin
I understand this is bad and needs a lot of work, but that's why I've submit it. I'm working on my romance writing for a larger story, so all critiques ...
Jul 18, 2009 -
Re: Hiya!
Hiya Sweetie and welcome to YWS! I'm Selene, but you probably already know that since I've seen you in chat. ;) Onto the lovely little things we like to call ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: G'day.
Hiya Gabriel! Lovely name, by the way. One of my characters are named Gabriel. :D My name's Selene *shakes hand* and it's nice to meet you. So how about a ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
9/10 That's important to remember. It's a short little quip of advice. :)
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Tainted
Hiya Greyed! Glad to see you've reviewed. ;) I am here to review! Nit-Picks : The dancing moonlight, stars abri *looks up 'abri'* Nope, it's not a word. I suppose ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Don't Worry...
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Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: just random romantic stuff...kinda like a fictional diary.
Welcome to YWS, always! :D Here we have a few simple rules that should be followed: ~Please review at least two pieces of work on YWS before posting your own. ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Don't Worry...
Hiya Huston and welcome to our happy, huge YWS family. I'm Selene, and it's nice to meet you, Huston. ^_^ On the YWS, there's a ton of stuff you can ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: What is socio-anxiety?
Hiya Socio! Welcome to YWS! I'm Selene, and it is a pleasure to meet you. ^_^ Emily Dickinson is a great poet. She's magnificent of her time, and I enjoy ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
Hey, I'm here to review! *cracks knuckles* Let's get to it! Nit-Picks : Another era another adventure, There should be a comma after 'era'. time to go see hidden treasures, ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Speedwrite the word above you!
Chocolate
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: The joy of akward introductions
Hiya Greyed and it's nice to meet you, too! Welcome to YWS! :D So on here we have a few simple rules that must be followed, or else you'll have ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Hiding
*Gah! Sorry I haven't posted for this in so long!* We walked side by side in the cobbled street, looking around at our new little village we'd be living in. ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: All That It Took
Heya Young! I'm here to dish out some nit-pickings! ^_^ Nit-Picks: ……And so they said to this little boy of eight, If he went on dreaming doom would be his ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: What would YOU do?
I would tell them they're going to die, too. Just like everyone else. What would you do if someone gave you a million dollars, but you were only allowed to ...
Jul 16, 2009
