SeleneForeverDream

#9 Two Different Things touch sin carefully, it's as delicate as a girl. let it in like a whisper tickling the ears of the corn, husky and deep his voice- ...

#8 when we ran down the empty road black tar heating and singing our feet wildflowers grew by the side of the road unnaturally tall, you said they were me ...

#7 Too Late Drink it up, my love. Dance the night in nothing, no time. My fists thrash. Cry. Choking on alcohol. Laugh. Mom yells in your ear to put ...

*Wow, I have a lot of catching up to do. I've been writing, I just haven't been updating. #6 Paint the realms of golden lie So hidden; out of sight, ...

#5 From Autistic Society Trips over words until gentle stutter sounds like a patter of rain on hard cement The curve of a downward lip, how it quirks up when ...

#4 Prejudice stranger, don't think I want to know you; one look and I know, oh, I know enough about. the way you take your coffee, eagerly licking the lip ...

#3 Stop Threatening Me With Love A nameless feeling, but it couldn’t be... No, love was never meant for me! Wretched thought, please be gone. The fight is lost, but ...

#2 Phantasm Vision is blackness, the darkest shade of the light; it creeps upon your brow and kisses you goodnight. Drifting sounds pound at mind’s door, their calling heard, but ...

NaPo 2011! Woo! Sorry I'm sneaking into the party a bit late, but I can't wait to see everyone else's threads! #1 Staged "All the World is a Stage, and ...

Hey cupcake! This poem just screamed cuteness to me! :D However, I think the rhyming took away from the poem and made some of the lines awkward. Other than that, ...

Hiya RubyTuesday! Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! I hope you're finding everything okay here. ^_^ I liked your description a lot, and I saw a lot of talent ...

Hi, Helen! I really like this style of writing you have going here- it's unique! The small details you were mindful to insert were quite effective in setting the stage ...

*I'm experimenting with rhythm and trochee, so to anyone who has experience with it, nit-picks would be greatly appreciated!* Rejection I came upon the words of naught sought out on ...

Hey there, Persephoneia! :D This poem was magical, and it does make sense that this was a nightmare. Yet I feel it had some beautiful air of mystery to it ...

Hi Blue! I enjoyed this poem; it was short and sweet. What I would really watch is the originality of what it is you're writing. I felt that you could ...