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Kate Bush is my favorite singer ever. She's the girl in my avatar (back in 1978). Other artists I love are Tori Amos, Hayley Westenra, Andrea Bocelli, and the Corrs. ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! Just so you know, I think the rules are that you should critique at least 2 pieces by other people before submitting your own, but ...

Thank you so much for critiquing, happy-go-lucky and Snoink. I really, really appreciate it. Snoink: Thank you for doing such a detailed critique. I'll be honest and say that at ...

4/10... don't really see the point... it's ok though.

I have several. Probably it's been said already, but here's my favorite writing tip: If you want to write, just write. The hardest part is getting started. Don't stop, don't ...

Good luck with your story. What's it about? I agree with the others: cool picture. And cool title. :)

A short summary of the novel I'm working on: There is another world called Cittemara. Maybe it always existed, and maybe people from this world thought it into being. Either ...

Congratulations on getting so far on your story! I have yet to write something that long. Your storyline sounds interesting too, even though I'm not usually crazy about vampires. Good ...

That second of your eyes left me empty. Now I lean against the wall, alone, breathless and smiling, aching for more of you. You’re stealing my soul. It’s so easy ...

Hello and welcome, Jonathan94! Just so you know, technically the rules are that you should review 2 things before submitting your own work, but since you're new it's ok that ...

Hello and welcome, Hopeful_Youth! This is a good poem; I can tell that it has a deep personal meaning to you. There are a few technical problems though. but i ...

Good poem. I like what you called it, "Falling Faith." There are several technical points I noticed you could fix: Its a mere tale of two days It's a mere ...

Thank you all SO much for reviewing! Your suggestions are helpful and I really appreciate them. :) I see what you mean about the story ending too quickly, Moriarty. Good ...

Hello Lex. This is a sweet poem, and I like it. I've done a line-by-line critique below. ********* I want to believe that you are sincere But I am afraid ...

6/10 because I've never heard of any of the artists. 1. Sawdust & Diamonds - Joanna Newsom 2. Rubberband Girl - Kate Bush 3. Crucify - Tori Amos 4. Breathless ...