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Re: Valentine
Thanks so much for critiquing, RoryLegend! I really appreciate it. :)
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
7/10... kinda creepy but cool... :D
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Poll
I voted yes, though that's only partially true. I've plotted out entire novels before and it gets a little bit boring, but I also am not a seat-of-the-pants writer. I ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Any feedback on this poem is greatly appreciated. Also, I'd love to hear any title ideas you might have. Thanks!! :) I’m almost afraid to see you because when you’re ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Something I should have appreciated more.
Hello. :) First of all, appreciated is spelled with two p's. ;) Okay. This poem leaves me puzzled. I want to like it. It's very distinctive. But I'm just not ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Fear
Hi there Picklebuddy7. :) I've done a line-by-line critique of your poem below. The stains on the carpet bleed color even though they're washed clean. These first lines don't make ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Bird
Hi there! :D This is a really nice poem. I've done a line-by-line critique of it below. Oh to be a bird! To soar and dive over mountains and oceans. ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Valentine
I just wrote this a couple of days ago and I don't know if it's any good or not. All critiques are appreciated! :) Valentine I didn’t have anything else ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: The curse
Hello erratik_statik. :) I like this poem of yours but I think you can make it better with a few adjustments. My heart is in a vice whenever I shyly ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: memoirs of Omega
Hi there! :) I really like this poem. The title caught my attention right away, and I like the non-rhyming style you've written the poem itself in. It's powerful, not ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
9/10 Very pretty!
Feb 27, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
5/10 I'm not crazy about the way it looks, but I like the poke it makes at Twilight.
Feb 22, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
8/10 I like it.
Feb 21, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
8/10 I like it! It's pretty.
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]
7/10... pretty flowers... :)
Feb 17, 2009
