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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Valentine

    Thanks so much for critiquing, RoryLegend! I really appreciate it. :)

    Mar 7, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    7/10... kinda creepy but cool... :D

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Poll

    I voted yes, though that's only partially true. I've plotted out entire novels before and it gets a little bit boring, but I also am not a seat-of-the-pants writer. I ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Untitled

    Any feedback on this poem is greatly appreciated. Also, I'd love to hear any title ideas you might have. Thanks!! :) I’m almost afraid to see you because when you’re ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Something I should have appreciated more.

    Hello. :) First of all, appreciated is spelled with two p's. ;) Okay. This poem leaves me puzzled. I want to like it. It's very distinctive. But I'm just not ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Fear

    Hi there Picklebuddy7. :) I've done a line-by-line critique of your poem below. The stains on the carpet bleed color even though they're washed clean. These first lines don't make ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Bird

    Hi there! :D This is a really nice poem. I've done a line-by-line critique of it below. Oh to be a bird! To soar and dive over mountains and oceans. ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Valentine

    I just wrote this a couple of days ago and I don't know if it's any good or not. All critiques are appreciated! :) Valentine I didn’t have anything else ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The curse

    Hello erratik_statik. :) I like this poem of yours but I think you can make it better with a few adjustments. My heart is in a vice whenever I shyly ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: memoirs of Omega

    Hi there! :) I really like this poem. The title caught my attention right away, and I like the non-rhyming style you've written the poem itself in. It's powerful, not ...

    Mar 4, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    9/10 Very pretty!

    Feb 27, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    5/10 I'm not crazy about the way it looks, but I like the poke it makes at Twilight.

    Feb 22, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    8/10 I like it.

    Feb 21, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    8/10 I like it! It's pretty.

    Feb 18, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [3]

    7/10... pretty flowers... :)

    Feb 17, 2009


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