ScriboErgoSum

Thank you all so much for reviewing!! :D vixeyt, I see where you're coming from, and I appreciate having your opinion. Thanks!

I am alone with my breathing in my dark room as I touch down where the secrets mesh. If I thought of you now it would be wrong, like stepping ...

Hi Erica! Nice to meet you. I like this poem's theme of how the choices we make affect our lives. However, in some places it seems awkward. I've done a ...

Hi gaylegoh! I'm ScriboErgoSum and I'll be critiquing your poem this morning. First off, I think this is a fantastic poem. You've taken a subject most people would never even ...

Twilight It already smells like night. The sky is draped with violet and the hush is sacred, here outside your place, your haunting ground. Everyone is long departed. This twilit ...

Hi, backgroundbob. :) This is a good poem you've written here. I like the non-rhyming structure and there are some gorgeous phrases you've used. The Easter morning ghost is Christ, ...

PAT BUCHANAN.

1: What did you guys do for Easter??? - Went to see my grandpa, and the younger kids had an Easter-egg hunt. 2: What are your views on Wicca??? - ...

Alan Rickman as Severus Snape. Freakin' great. :smt054

Hello there! :D I must say, your rhythm is perfect in this sonnet. It flows really nicely. That's hard to do - good job. You've also used the language really ...

Red Rain - Peter Gabriel

Out of curiosity, ~Excalibur~, how many homeschooled kids do you actually know? I'd like to add to the many interesting points made here that I don't think public school itself ...

Ooh, I have lots. "Well, I'm not seventeen but I've cuts on my knees Falling down as the winter takes one more cherry tree" Tori Amos, "Girl" "Come back, I'll ...

1. Every finger in the room is pointing at me 2. Could you see the aisles of women? Could you see them screaming and weeping? 3. It's 3 A.M. and ...

Thank you so much for the suggestions, Forever Threnody, niteowl and Lil_Pau! I really appreciate that you took the time to critique. :)