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I'm trying to write my first decent novel. Even though I've been writing seriously for almost two years (since NaNo '06), I have yet to turn out a novel that ...

When I was little my great-grandmother told me things, and even though I was only four or five when she told me, her words have stuck in my head and ...

I've done a fairly detailed critique on your entire piece below. **** I am the ghost within the walls; I have lived in this house for countless years. And for ...

Inside a small farmhouse in the village of Shihong, to the North of China, sat a girl cross-legged on the floor. She was no more than sixteen, a book balanced ...

Hello there, it's nice to meet you! I'm fairly new here too, and this is a fun and enormously addictive site. See you around! (Oh, and your avatar is tooooo ...

Thank you so much for reviewing and for your kind comments!! I like the title suggestion, unsterblichkeit36. Thank you! :)

Wow. You use some fascinating language and imagery. I have to say this is one of the most interesting poems I've ever read. There is the major issue, though, of ...

I think the rules are that you should review at least 2 things before posting one of your own. Just so you know. About your poem: It's got a potentially ...

Sorry, but I'm going to say that after several readings, this poem strikes me as being too unoriginal. It's the cliche story of lovers who, somehow, aren't together anymore. The ...

Hello Sarah! You wrote your first novel when you were 7 ?! :shock: I am impressed. I think I was still writing one-page stories at that point, heh. By the ...

In ten years I'll be 25 ( :shock: ). I'll be out of college, and I want to have at least one novel published by then. If I'm not a ...

Hello, This is one of the only poems I've written that I actually like. I know it's got some flaws but I wanted to see what other people thought. Thank ...

Hello there, This is a decent poem, definitely. It has a good rhythm to it. However, the message and some of the wording seems a little cliche. Especially, "I'll drift ...

Hello, I thought this was really good. It's well written, and it flows well. I especially liked how descriptive your writing is. There aren't any spelling or grammar suggestions I ...

I loooove Neil Gaiman but I've never read Sandman because I've never really liked graphic novels. So many people talk about how good it is, though, so maybe I'll have ...